Basic concept of the evil character from my comic... or one of them anyway...
Quick Bio~
Dark sorcerer, expert in alchemy and the martial arts. He is said to be older then the great pyramids themselves. His country of origin is unknown. He is a wanderer, travelling the world on the back of a dragon (sometimes by ship) with his followers. (including several dragons)
The armor he forged himself with influences from various cultures around the world. He has learned countless battle techniques that can only be mastered over several lifetimes. His weapons range from long swords to mere daggers. His primary weapon is a mace and whip made from braided strands of hair from a Tahenscar. (Kiragas species)
The hair is able to manipulate fire and is nearly impossible to cut or break. The breast and shoulder plates are constantly carrying burning coals which can be opened, and with a flick of his whip, he can char enemies much like a dragon. Parts of his armor including the helmet, also have strands of the hair, making him virtually fireproof in case one of his own dragons turn on him.
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This is kinda how I wanted him to look originally, but his armor is constantly changing in my mind... but the basic shape and look is there. This is also why part 2 of my comic is on hold (so many details)
hmmm... I feel maybe too much info given about this character (the whole older than pyramids and expert alchemist might just been better to reveal throughout the story[reveals to much to those who know everything about alchemists])
well... just from the describtion it definately says he's killed quite a few of Kiraga and Teig's(?) people, and also the fact that he is probably the alchemist who created the "Philosiphers stone" or "Grande Panacea" giving him not only great alchemic powers, but also eternal life, making him the First and greatest alchemist in history, there's alittle more but nothing too important... great idea and character though, very original... wish i could've been as much...
well if it's just the way i see him, that doesn't actually mean that's the way you wanted him to be. also, the villain of a story (if he's worthy of such a title) needs to present a challenge to the heroes. besides, the bad guys in my story consist of the devil, anti-christ, and a seemingly immortal possessor of the evil eye, so go crazy (just not DBZ crazy) ^_^
This is quite the horrid creature and the whole thing, using dragons, older than the pyramids, the that type of armor, very interesting. I think the general idat if the3 burning in the shoulder pates and the hair as a fire manipulation are quite well thought in concepts as well, very nice.
And yeah, I'd hate to spoil too much of it